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The Trouble With Forever

Commitment issues are his running shoes

The trouble with forever
It happens rarely ever
They put it in a letter
Then say that it is treasure

The trouble with forever
It happens next to never
They promise you less error
Then leave in stormy weather

The trouble with forever
For worse or for better
At first they give you pleasure
Then the rest is only terror

The trouble with forever
It feels light as a feather
It promises only leisure
But it’s gone once there’s pressure

© Delia Ross. 2019

By PoeEternal

I'm gone. Maybe it's like I never existed at all.

3 replies on “The Trouble With Forever”

No one wants to put in the “work” to build and maintain a happy relationship but that’s mostly because most guys are carrying on five different relationships at a time with women…

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I don’t think that women are exempt from that criticism, either. But I agree – it’s about building that foundation of a strong and happy relationship, from two people who are willing to do it.

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