It’s not the best house but it’s definitely not the worst
And if you think I’m worthless well honey you’re not the first
And if you think I’m perfect well your bubble I’m here to burst
And if you blame obsession I know I’ve got the thirst
I may not be a diamond but I’m definitely not a curse
And if you’re wanting love well my heart left in a hearse
I might have said I loved you once or twice in verse
But if I stick around I’ll likely make it worse
Β© Delia Ross. 2020


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Not The First is simply…. wow
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I like that you like this! π
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You wrote your feelings beautifully. I love it π
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*squee* I’m so pleased!! β€
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Keep on writing as you feel, you do that so well
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Thanks very much, Nick! I do give it my absolute all. π
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You really do and it shows βΊοΈππ»
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This is fantastic. Your writing continues to impress. Heartfelt and wonderful
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That’s so lovely to hear, thank you so much!! π
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I keep thinking there is more to this. Possibly as a lyric
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It does have a bit of cadence to it. I miss leading marching formations and doing cadence. It slips out from time to time. But there aren’t any other lines for this, it was also written freestyle yesterday. I can only go so long without writing. Addicted. But for some reason people don’t like rhyming poetry that much anymore. Thanks for the feedback. I may do this as spoken word for my campaign. I haven’t decided yet. π
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Oddly enough your influence has me writing more rhymes.
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I’m happy to be a muse. π At least you acknowledge that. Others take from me without so much as a thumbs up or credit. It’s upsetting.
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Careful with that. I once wrote something about muses. To me they’ve always been the driving force in my writing. Although I do get what you mean here and a, happy to both acknowledge and thank you for the influence
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There’s an entire circle of bloggers who check out my poetry and I’ll write something specific and then it pops up in their poetry but I don’t even so much as get a thumbs-up or a like… So thank you for at least liking my stuffs. It’s appreciated very much!! π
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But… how beautiful are u? ππ
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Awe well thank you so much! That’s kind of you! π
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