He never told her how much she meant to him
Because she didn’t mean a thing
Love she never learned to swim
And so wound up drowning
Deeper yet she tried to wade
To kill the fire that’s burning
Heavy prices have been paid
But what he taught she isn’t learning
ยฉ Delia Ross. 2020

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Your poem captures the essence of heartbreak! The torture of unrequited love resembles drowning in many ways. ๐
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You really understood me and I thank you so much! Thank you for your beautiful review! It helps heal my broken heart. โค๐โค
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My pleasure! I love reading your creative works. ๐น
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Thank you so much!! ๐
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Thank you for reading and the love. ๐ชโค๐ช
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So captivating!
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That’s really lovely to hear, thank you! โค
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Beautifully done, Poe!
Not an ounce of fat on it.
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Thanks so much, Nick! ๐
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Keep bringing it to us Delia. All your poems are so incredibly DEEP as the ocean, DARK as a volcano erupting, yet, SHINES among star lights in the sky. Well done!
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Thank you mama!! ๐
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